Teh Wozzinator

one thing i must ask, though, is...why is it called Mutts? perhaps that has to do with the real mystery subject?????

well...sorry, it isn't going to be continued, i messed up the last sentence, it's supposed to be "He was slammed into the intersection of Peterston and 4th, the upside down ...

my edits are in bold Hey this is my first thing to ever post so keep that in mind when you read this! I need the criticism, so please don't ...

i really liked the story and your "half dragon" people, but "The Dragon Story" is way too cliche and generic. try something more like Dragon Half ooh, i like that, ...

here's chapter one...hopefully i won't mess up and double post this time. my edits are in bold... Chapter 1 Unexpected Guests On a rainy, warm, i think that maybe this ...

ok, here's the prologue (sorry, i'll probably mention things other people said, because i didn't read the other reviews) Prologue Ah, death. The thing many fear because they think it ...

lol, when are you going to post it?? oh, tomorrow...(btw, you already said that your ear was aching when you wrote it--lol!) PM me when five's done

oh wow, it's over already? that was quick...anyways, i think that the epilogue and her going home to her mother were way way way way way too rushed. you need ...

ok, chapter four... Chapter 4 That after no space here noon Jamie and Dymus went on a walk throught no "t" at the end the city. Jamie looks at everything ...

well, if i ever figure out how to get the music written...i might upload a vid of it somewhere, and if so i'll give you the link

omigosh, i have the best Bartemius quote ever!! " Bartemius says , Eat your vegetables. - Your mom." lol! actually, i like the homer simpson ones a lot... oh, right, ...

it's probably just because you have a great story that lots of people will want to read. :-D you know...if you ever have time...maybe you could look at my "magic ...

i realize how it could be mistaken for a girlfriend...i tried to mention the father at the start, but it just wouldn't work. btw, i haven't had experience with father ...

aedomir, i was just wondering...how do you get so many reviews? lol! i just noticed yours because i had finished a review and went back to the homepage and yours ...

ok, here's edits for chapter two. sorry, i'm going to post each chapter seperately cuz it's really confusing. i'm also going to put a space between each paragraph so i ...